We are a year 7 & 8 class from Pompallier Catholic School. My teacher is Whaea Danni.
Good work explaining what happened in the video, you need to add more detail to your descriptions to paint a better picture for your reader.
Nice james i like what you did down on your work keep it up
Great work James but you need to add more detail
great job James with explaining the video but i think you need to add more descriptive words to paint a photo
Wow James good work I like the imfo you put into your blog post. good mahi James keep it up
Good work explaining what happened in the video, you need to add more detail to your descriptions to paint a better picture for your reader.
ReplyDeleteNice james i like what you did down on your work keep it up
ReplyDeleteGreat work James but you need to add more detail
ReplyDeletegreat job James with explaining the video but i think you need to add more descriptive words to paint a photo
ReplyDeleteWow James good work I like the imfo you put into your blog post. good mahi James keep it up
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